2018년 마지막날인 오늘 때마침 타이밍이 좋게 Common App 관련 샘플을 올릴수 있는 기회가 생겨서 포스팅해드려요!
오늘은 사기꾼 Hee Suck Chung - 영문이름 Howard Chung 의 아들인 Josh Yeram Chung 의 Georgia Tech Common App Essay (한글로는 커먼앱 에세이) 샘플을 제공할수있게 도와주셨어요.
"안녕하세요, 하워드 정이라고 합니다.
저희 아들이 이번에 Early Action으로 4 학교에 지원할 예정입니다.
Application과 essay에 대해 컨설팅 요청드리고자 합니다.
시간과 비용을 알려주시면, 찾아뵈던지, 아니면 어떻게 진행하는 것이 좋을 지도 알려주시기 부탁드립니다.
잘 부탁드립니다.
Howard Chung 드림
217-714-9885"
사기꾼 Hee Suk Chung 이 보내준 Josh Yeram Chung 의 Resume 는 아래와 같았구요~
잘 써진 Resume 는 절대 아니였어요~;
샘플 특성상 자세한 부분을 모두 공유해야할것같아서 사기꾼 Hee Suk Chung 에게 제공받은 사기꾼 아들 Josh Yeram Chung Resume 도 같이 올려요.
Josh
Yeram Chung
OBJECTIVE:
Seeking an internship to engage with the guest of
varying ages to introduce, educate, and most importantly inspire the guests in science
and science-related discipline to further their motivation toward the fields of
science, technology, and medicine.
EDUCATION: Gwinnett School of
Mathematics, Science, and Technology
Expected
Graduation Date: May 2019
Relevant
Courses:
·
Advance
Placement Gifted Calculus: 2016-2017
·
Advance
Placement Gifted Biology: 2016-2017
·
Advance
Placement Gifted Statistic: 2016-2017
·
Scientific
Research Gifted: 2016-2017
·
Computer
Science Principles: 2015-2016
·
Accelerated
Pre-Calculus Gifted: 2015-2016
·
Fundamentals
Concepts of Engineering: 2015-2016
·
Application
of Engineering: 2016-2017
·
Gifted
Physics: 2015-2016
·
Gifted
Chemistry: 2015-2016
TECHNICAL SKILLS:
Knowledge
in:
·
AutoCad
·
AutoDesk
Inventor
·
Java
·
LoggerPro
·
Microsoft
Office
·
Korean
Translation
ACTIVITIES:
Science Olympiad:
2012-2013; 2015-2017
Math Team: 2015-2017
American Math
Competition 8: 2014
American Math
Competition 10: 2014, 2016, 2017
American Invitational
Math Examination: 2015
·
Achieved
the Certificate of Distinction from Mathematical Association of America
Engineering Honor
Society: 2015-2017
Korean-American
Scientists and Engineers Association: 2014
WORK EXPERIENCE:
Scientific Research
:2016-2017
·
Research on the Production of Ethanol Using
Various Concentration of Yeast and Glucose.
ELEKTA
·
Job
Shadow of Employees Researching New Methods of Treating Tumor Cancer in the
Brain and Lungs Using Various Radioactive Isotopes.
Bridge Design
·
Research
on Different Types of Bridges
·
Method
of Joints: Mathematic Principles of Force Distribution on Bridge Members
·
Achieved
1034% Efficiency
8- Bit Game Creation
·
Created
a Functional Playable Game Using Java and Greenfoot software.
References
For
Joshua Y. Chung
-1-
Geoffrey Freymuth
Physical Science
Jefferson Middle School
Champaign, IL
217-351-370 (ext. 1926)
freymuge@champaignschools.org
-2-
Cheri Nations
STEM Enrichment
North Gwinnett Middle
School
Sugar Hill, Georgia
cheri_nations@gwinnett.k12.ga.us
그리고, 아들인 Joshua Yeram Chung 에 대한 간단한 Background 도 제공해주셨어요~
아들의 배경
과학과 엔니니어링 좋아함- SAT subject test 둘다 만점
초등학고 4학년때 한국에서 이민
친구들과 친한 것도 좋지만 유듀브와의 공학연구 및 탐구시간을 혼자서 많이 즐김
독서보다는 실험과 테스트, 연구, 실험, 토론 검증 좋아함
어떤 문제의 원인을 끝까지 연구해서 원임 밝히는 것 좋아함
탐구심, 지적 호기심, 우수, 물리, 화락, 생물의 수학적 근거를 좋아함
신동은 아니지만 과학적 신비에 대한 관심과 엔지니어링적적 적용
초등학교때 할머니 백혈병으로 돌아가실 때 암세포 죽이는 초 미세로봇 만들어서 할머니 살리고자 꿈꾼일
친구들과 경쟁적으로 프로젝트 성공한 것
조지아의 과학경진 대회에서 10번 정도 학교를 위해 기여한 것
탐구정신, 개척정신, 호기심, 아픈사람에 대한 동정, 가난한 사람을 위한 엔지니어링 목표
창의적이고 열심히 하는 태도, 남들을 배려하는 정신이 뛰어남
그리고, 사기꾼 Howard Chung 님이 제공해준 Georgia Tech Common App 질문은 총 7개였구요~
질문은 아래와 같이 보내주셨어요.
Q5. Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
Common App 에세이의 샘플 작업을 하기 위해서 제공받은 자료는 Joshua Yeram Chung 의 Background & Resume 부분이 모두 다 였구요~
받은 자료 베이스로 Prompt Q5 에 맞춰서 모두 지어드렸어요 :)
여기서 팁을 드리자면, 좋은 퀄리티의 Common App 을 작성하기 위해선, 최대한 자세하게 본인 스토리 및 정보를 제공해주셔야하시는점이에요~ Joshua Yeram Chung 의 케이스처럼 기본적인 정보만으로 작성을 하게 될 경우에는 아래의 샘플과 같이 개인적인 스토리를 반영하는데 한계가 있는점 참고해주세요!
좋은 Common App 을 작성하기위해선 개인의 자세한 스토리라인이 갖쳐줘야한다는부분 꼭 명심해주세요! :) 그래야 더 유니크한 커먼앱 에세이를 완성하실수있으세요!
그럼, Q5.에 맞춰서 작성한 Common App Essay 공유해드릴게요~!
Common App Essay - 커먼앱 에세이가 어떻게 작성되는지 궁금하신분들에게 아주 좋은 샘플이 될것같아요 :)
아래 커먼앱 에세이 샘플 잘 참고하시고, 원하시는 대학교에 꼭 붙으시길 바랄게요!
Common App: Science in Our Lives
Science
is an essential concept in our daily lives as it makes life easier, meaningful,
and fascinating. It is a field of study that I have always admired because of
its emphasis on experimentation, rationalization, observation, and prediction. I
consider science as the backbone of human progression and prosperity because of
the growth and development of social, economic, and environmental aspects of
human lives in the recent centuries as a result of science. For instance,
science has contributed to new developments and inventions in medicine,
communications, transportation, information, and has become a crucial component
in solving problems facing the society. The
world today is plagued by a plethora of challenges such as climate change, finding
alternative methods for sustainable energy supply, and identifying ways to
provide adequate food or water for an increasing population. Since the domain
of science has helped shape the past and the present, it offers a means to
transform our shared future for the better.
Looking
back at my education so far, I can arrive at the conclusion that I am
passionate about conducting experiments, tests, research, and contributing to discussion that spur critical thought. All
these activities are key steps in the scientific method. While the constant
innovation and discovery over the past century may give an illusion everything
has been invented, the challenges that face the modern world effectively
counter this narrative. My passion for science is based on the fact that it
tries to explain a finding or the intention of a phenomenon. With this in mind,
the study of scientific disciplines promotes rigorous research activities to
help individuals gain skills that are in high demand within the job market.
More
importantly, the scientific method focus on logical explanations for every
discovery; hence, instilling the importance of logic and critical thinking. The
absence of an understanding of logic and scientific principles has contributed
to an anti-science movement that threatens the continued progress of the human
race. For instance, a growing number of parents refuse to vaccinate their
children despite the well-established scientific evidence over decades that
demonstrate the health risk posed by such decisions. Such individuals commonly
debate thoughts and opinions against scientific facts without the realization
that these facts have been arrived at through a messy and rigorous process of
testing different ideas and collecting evidence. These thoughts and opinions
are peddled as “alternative facts.” While I am cognizant that science has its
weaknesses, the world we live in today is evidence enough that science and the
scientific method presents as the best solution to understand our complex
world. Science seeks to inspire debate and consensus regarding these questions
we have regarding our world. By applying the right theories founded on evidence
and unquestionable logic, it is possible to change the mindset and set beliefs
that lack facts to support a concept.
My
passion for science is not only fueled by the need to acquire skills important
for advancing humanity, but also the practical application that arise from the
practicing scientific principles. Unfortunately, my grandmother died of
leukemia when I was in elementary school. Her death was painful since in our
community, the extended family plays a big role in a child’s upbringing. In
this case, my grandmother was a second parent who took care of me when my
parents were away at work, and provided comfort and care without any
expectation of return. As she slowly wasted away due to the disease in her
final years, I remember naively perusing various science books in the library
attempting to arrive at a treatment. At the time I did not fully understand her
disease, but I thoroughly believed science would present a solution. One of the
ideas I came up with was to design an ultra-fine robot, which can destroy
cancer cells to save a life. I elicited some laughs upon presenting this
solution to my friends and family with the idea being termed as fiction.
However, recent news are abound with talks on nanotechnology with some
researchers identifying solutions of combating disease that are remarkably
similar to what I had come up with. Accordingly, science has helped bridge the
gap between fact and fiction. Science and the scientific method not only grows
existing knowledge and skills, but it also develops practical solutions to the
myriad of problems threatening the existence of humanity.
In
the context of solutions to humanity’s challenges, I like science since it
inspires creativity through the act of critical thinking and critique that make
up part of the scientific method. If you could ask anyone to identify a
creative individual, many of those polled would quickly point to an entertainer
or artist as evidence of a creative person. If you would asks the same group
whether a Nobel Prize winner can be classified as creative, you would receive a
chorus of no’s from the group. Solving problems through scientific research
demands a high level of creative thought. For instance, scientific creativity
inspired coded communication through telegraph lines; speech communication
through telephone lines; and verbal, symbolic, and textual communication
conveyed wirelessly. As observed in this example, scientific creativity has not
only imagined solutions for clear challenges but also imagined possibilities that
serve to innovate on established inventions. The challenge of long distance communication
was solved through the invention of the telegraph. However, scientific
creativity was at the heart of progressing communication from the outdated
telegraph to the modern smartphone. My passion for science inspires me to
develop critical thinking skills that would allow me to be a part of the global
community innovating and inventing the future world.
My
good performance in science subjects is proof that I am hardworking and my
curiosity to build a robot that can destroy cancer cells shows my enthusiasm on
the subject. Furthermore, I have managed to participate in almost ten science
contests, and I am proud to represent my high school in such endeavors since it
provides me with an opportunity to understand concepts better, gain new
knowledge, and engage in conversations with like-minded people. I look forward
to joining a university that will help me broaden my skills towards an
integrative approach to the advancement of scientific research.
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샘플 필요하신분들에게 꼭 필요했으면 좋겠네요 :)
참고로, Georgia Tech's Short Answer 또한 사기꾼 하워드 정의 아들 Joshua Yeram Chung 의 정보 베이스로 적어드린부분이니 참고해주세요 :)
그럼 예시 잘보시고 좋은 결과 있으시길 바랄게요!
Why do you want to study your chosen major at Georgia
Tech, and how do you think Georgia Tech will prepare you to pursue
opportunities in that field after graduation? (250 words)
As I was looking
for a university that would provide my desired major and help me attain my
academic and career goals, Georgia Institute of Technology stood out to me among
the rest. The reason for this consideration is because not only has the college
been consistently ranked among the country’s top ten engineering institutions,
but also the college is the largest producer of engineering degrees awarded to
women and underrepresented minority students according to the American Society
of Engineering. To me, the latter speaks
volumes about the type of institution that Georgia Tech is, and for me, it’s more than just having somewhere that I
can study but also somewhere where I am confident I would feel at home.
The program at
Georgia Institute of Technology is suited for my goals because the college
provides a curriculum that is not only practical but also very hands-on. Secondly,
I was intrigued to learn that Georgia
Institute of Technology is highly ranked
in engineering research and development. I value this a lot because I am
inherently curious about how things work and have a keen mind in applying what
I learn to solve real-world problems. To
me, engineering is one of those fields that address
the most impactful issues in the world,
and I firmly believe that the college
will give me an excellent opportunity to
expand my horizons and realize my dreams.
In our application review, we want to get to know you
better. One way to do that is to understand a typical day for you. Please
describe your typical day. (250 words)
A typical day for
me starts at around 6 a.m. The first thing I do is to meditate. I sit down, get
comfortable and meditate for roughly around ten minutes. Meditation is a habit
that my mother got me into and I have found it to be a very useful tool when it comes to making sure that my thoughts
are not all over the place. If I am dealing with something, whether it’s at
school or at home, then I find that I am
able to take a step back before reacting and really think about how I want to
deal with that situation. I finish of my meditation with a prayer, and that is
a way of setting my intentions for the day. I find that professing what exactly
I want to achieve during the day makes it easier to maintain my focus at
school. After I’m done meditating, I’ll get ready for school and the better
part of the day will be spent at school. I get back at around four and this is
when I get to either work on current projects or research on interesting
engineering projects that I can work on. To be honest, the practical aspect of
Engineering is what excites me the most and YouTube has been one of my greatest
allies. After I am done, I’ll spend the rest of my hours helping my siblings
with their homework, catch up with family and friends, and planning my next
day.
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