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오늘은 Narrative Essay Sample 을 올릴예정이구요~
한글로는 "내러티브 에세이" 라고 하더라구요~
내러티브 에세이 주제는 "Violence is a Temporary Solution" 으로 정해서 적어봤어요!
미국,캐나다,영국 및 호주등등 영어권 대학교가시면 한번쯤은 꼭 쓰는 에세이 과제이니, 어떻게 작성되어지는지 참고하시면 좋을것같아요 :)
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Narrative Essay Sample: 내러티브 에세이 샘플
Violence
is a Temporary Solution
My elementary school experiences hold
memories that make me who I am today. I was bullied from the playground right
through to the toilets during recess. I believe this was due to my small frame,
in both height and garth. Naturally, the bigger students viewed me as a mark to
inflate their ego. In retrospect, I tend to think they did this because of
problems at home or perhaps they were victims of bullying. I was easy prey on
which they could vent their frustrations. However, through my childhood
experiences and memories, I know violence is a temporary solution to any
problem.
In elementary school, I had firsthand
experience of hours locked in a locker. I also remember my head in a toilet
bowl or sink; punched and shoved around, a lot. I had nicknames such as “skinny
bah lanky,” they played pranks on me, among other abuse. One day all this ended.
I reached the end of my tether; I could not roll with the punches any more. I
cracked, the psychological and physical torment had reached boiling point, and my
self-esteem needed redemption.
I recall one particular incident on
the playground it is as vivid as if it was yesterday. Our playground was colorful
it had plenty of slides in bright green while the swings were in bright
yellows, blues, and reds. There was a basketball court, a tennis court, and
ample room to run around. On this particular day, I was at the basketball court
enjoying my new ball. I cherished this ball because two days back my father
gave it to me as a birthday present, a gift. Therefore, I was shooting hoops
and lost in the activity, reveling in the joy of the moment. As expected, the
bullies are always lurking around waiting for easy prey.
Nonetheless, on this particular occasion,
I had not considered this reality as I dribbled the ball until a certain boy materialized
at my side and began bothering me. Eventually, he snatched the ball out of my
hand, without uttering a word. I felt anger rise that I never knew myself
capable. My heart racing, hair damp on my forehead, teeth clamped together, and
fingers clenched into fists, and I was livid. I had difficulty breathing due to
the tightness in my chest, and my eyes stung with frustration. I was as a bear
deprived of her cubs; nothing prepared me for what followed.
“Give that back,” I hissed under my
breath.
He paid no attention nor did he acknowledge my
presence. His attitude was his folly I had an emotional attachment to the ball,
and I was not going to give in easily. It happened in a flash, one moment I was
standing, the next, the bully was on flat on his back, and I was bent over him
raining blows on his face. As if in a stupor, I stood up and the boy got on his
feet and ran away howling at the top of his lungs. I felt spent, but I had a
sense of achievement as I picked my “precious” ball and went to class.
As expected,
the boy went to the principal to report the incident because I was summoned to
the office within ten minutes into the reading lesson. As I walked into the
principal’s office, I felt neither fear nor remorse. In normal circumstances, I
visited this office for good reasons; I performed exceptionally well in piano
contests and mathematics. Naturally, the principal liked me but on this occasion,
his brow creased and his lip curled upward in disappointment.
“Can
you explain what happened?”
“Sir,
that boy is a bully, this is not the first time he has attacked me.”
“And,
you chose to settle the matter by hitting, him? Why didn’t you come to me?”
The principal’s demeanor was one of anger, I knew
arguing, or displaying my idea of ethics was a waste of my time as well as his.
Instead, I scrutinized his nose as it flared and relaxed as an expression of
restrained emotion. At some point I stopped listening, I came back to my senses
when he said,
“Your
mother is on her way here. I must add that we do not tolerate violence.”
I had to sit in
the principal’s office until my mother arrived. Her first reaction was shock
mingled with concern. Admittedly, I was a quiet child, minding my own business most
of the time playing alone and reading, so the situation at hand was foreign. For
the first time, I felt I had let my mother down. However, I knew in the depths
of my soul that I had found a solution to the years of bullying, fight back. My
mother apologized profusely concerning my violent outburst. I did not explain
to my mother what transpired; I had never complained about the bullying. After
this considering the same, I chose to stay silent on the matter. I was grounded
which was two weeks of no TV. Thankfully, the school did not expel me, as it
was the first and only stain on my sparkling record. Most importantly, I had no
further incidences of bullying I enjoyed my solitude immensely.
Little
did I know that I had awakened the seed of violence, as it was dormant. In middle
school, I met Pete, he was similar to me, quiet, and loved books, and we became
friends. He had recently transferred to our school, and our relationship
blossomed and deepened within a short time. During one lunch break, I found
Andrew holding Pete by the scuff and shaking him ruthlessly. I threw down my knapsack
I felt the same way as when the bully in elementary school tried to take my
ball. Heart racing as I strode to the place, Pete was struggling under Andrew’s
steady grip. I dug my nails into Andrew’s arm until I drew blood, I also kicked
him in the shin. Andrew was a bully, big for his age but I did not think about
this at the time. Yelping in pain, Andrew let go of Pete while hurling insults,
I had put him in his place.
“You
losers, you geeks wait until I get you.”
I know this was empty threats, so I did not bother
answering him. I knew as in elementary school I had also staked a claim,
“Do not mess with me.”
I had learned in elementary school that violence was
the solution to bullying. Now in middle school I believed that the solution
remained the same, I got the results I desired, eliminating the bullies. Andrew
did not take the matter to the principal’s office, and I do not know why he
chose to keep silent. Therefore, middle school was reasonably calm and quiet.
By
the time I was in high school; I had grown in height and girth and was no
longer the skinny lanky kid. I spent hours in the gym, and I was on the
football team, strong and capable of defending myself using physical strength. However,
one thing bothered me when I got angry it is as if I stopped existing and I
took on another personality. I wondered within myself,
“What
if one day I lose absolute control and it leads to the harm or death of a
person.”
I knew that I
had to learn to control my anger in adverse situations. Then, I discovered meditation
it was an Einstein moment, and I use Yoga to meditate to date.
Generally,
violence appeared as an answer to bullying, but in truth, I was never
comfortable with the same. In effect, the triumph was short-lived, but I felt
uncomfortable with the means of victory. Additionally, I ponder on the issue that
the line between self-dense and violence is thin indeed. Therefore, to date, I
resolve issues using every peaceable measure available to stir clear of
violence.
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